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Too late to cry, I won’t take you back.

by Debbywrites

Volume 1

Chapter 15

6 min read•Published Oct 20, 2026

Lessons in the dark 

The night air hung thick and freezing over the unmapped border zone, the bitter scent of damp soil and iron lingering in my raw throat.

Pinned against the rough bark of the massive oak tree, my lungs screamed for oxygen. The tracker’s calloused fingers dug deeper into my windpipe, trapping my head against the wood while the second warrior stepped forward, his blunt iron training blade flashing cold in the moonlight. Panic beat wildly in my chest. I had relied on speed, on agility, on outrunning the shadows and now, trapped with zero leverage, I was entirely at their mercy.

Before the second hunter could bring the weapon down, a low, commanding voice cut through the dark like a blade.

"Enough."

The pressure on my throat vanished instantly. The two pack champions stepped back, bowing their heads in unison before melting backward into the tree line.

I collapsed onto my knees in the damp moss, coughing violently as cold air rushed into my starved lungs. I pressed a trembling hand against my bruised neck, my eyes watering as I looked up.

Zayn emerged from the shadows, his expression unreadable, his golden eyes cold under the pale moonlight. He stood over me, his tall frame blocking out the night sky.

"You failed," Zayn said, his voice flat and stern. 

"You treated The Trail of Blood and Iron like a race. You relied on pure speed and momentum, but the moment you were cornered, you panicked. A wolf with speed is dangerous, Raven. A wolf that crumbles when trapped is dead."

I forced myself to stand, my boots digging into the loose dirt as I wiped a smear of mud from my cheek. "I had no leverage—"

"Then you make leverage," Zayn interjected sharply, his eyes narrowing. "You don't fight like a runner who got caught. You fight like a predator with nothing left to lose."

He took a step closer, letting the heavy weight of his presence sink into me. "This was only the first test. The judges will not give you room to breathe. The remaining two trials will make this forest feel like a mercy."

He crossed his arms, outlining the terms with cold precision. "The second test is The Phantom of the Abyss. It is pure sensory deprivation. You will be placed in complete, absolute darkness against hidden stalkers who know every inch of the terrain. Sight will be useless. If you cannot track by scent, sound, and instinct alone, they will gut you before you hear a single footstep."

I kept my jaw set, absorbing every word despite the throbbing ache in my chest.

"And the third," Zayn continued, "is The Alpha’s Reckoning. A raw test of dominance and physical endurance. You will stand in an open arena against an Alpha-tier combatant pouring their full, unbridled aura over you. They will crush your bones and test whether your spirit breaks before your body does."

He glanced down at my scraped knuckles and the purple bruising already forming on my throat.

"Your ground game is weak, and your close quarters recovery is sloppy," Zayn stated plainly, turning toward the path leading back toward the stronghold. "The forest is done. We have three days before the trial, and I will not waste a single hour."

Those three days became a blur of brutal, non-stop preparation. Zayn structured every waking hour to break my bad habits and force me to adapt to the grim reality of the remaining tests.

After my failure in the border forest on that first day, Zayn dragged me straight to the private palace courtyard that very night. We spent hours focusing entirely on ground combat and close quarters control. He threw me against stone walls and slammed me into the hard ground repeatedly, teaching me to stop fighting for space and start using an attacker’s weight against them.

On the second day, he prepared me for The Phantom of the Abyss. He brought me down into the pitch-black subterranean vaults beneath the stronghold, stripping away my sight entirely. In the smothering dark, he forced me to dodge hidden attacks relying strictly on the shift of air currents, the rustle of leather, and the faint scent of copper and sweat.

By the third day, we tackled The Alpha’s Reckoning. Zayn unleashed his raw Alpha aura, filling the courtyard with an oppressive, suffocating weight that made my knees buckle and my wolf whine in retreat. He forced me to spar under that crushing pressure, pushing my mind to stay sharp even when my body felt like it was encased in lead.

By the final night, three days of relentless torment had pushed my body to its absolute limits.

"Again!" Zayn barked, his voice echoing off the torchlit stone walls of the courtyard.

My muscles burned, my skin was mapped in dark bruises, and every breath tasted like hot iron. But I didn't hesitate. I threw myself forward, ducking beneath his sweeping arm, dropping my weight, and twisting my hips to hook his front leg just as we had drilled a hundred times before.

When he drove his frame forward to pin me against the wall, I didn't freeze. I used his forward momentum, pivoted sharply on my heel, and locked my forearm against the back of his neck, driving him toward the stone before snapping back into a defensive stance.

Zayn caught himself against the wall, stopping effortlessly before turning around. A faint, approval-filled gleam flashed in his golden eyes, breaking through his rigid mask.

"Better," he said quietly, lowering his hands as the tension in the air finally receded. "Much better."

The deep black of the third night was beginning to fade into a cold, misty gray along the eastern horizon. The three days Zayn had bought me were officially up.

I sank onto the low stone bench near the perimeter wall, my legs trembling from sheer exhaustion. Sweat slicked my hairline, and my chest heaved as I fought for air.

Zayn stepped up to me, holding a small wooden jar of cooling ointment. Without a word, he knelt on one knee directly in front of me, dipping two fingers into the dark salve.

I leaned back slightly in surprise, but Zayn reached up, gently tipping my chin back with one finger while applying the cool cream to the harsh marks on my throat. His touch was remarkably gentle, a stark contrast to the ruthless mentor who had spent the last three days throwing me against stone walls.

"You are stubborn," Zayn murmured, his voice dropping into a low, quiet hum as his thumb gently rubbed the ointment into my bruised skin.

"I have to be," I whispered, my eyes locking onto his. "If I fail tomorrow, everything ends."

Zayn paused, his thumb lingering near the steady pulse point on my jaw. He looked deeply into my eyes, the heavy silence between us carrying far more weight than any instruction he had given over the past three days.

"You won't fail," he said softly, his voice carrying the gravity of a solemn oath. "I won't let you."

He pulled his hand back and stood as the first sliver of dawn broke over the palace spire, casting long silver shadows across the stone.

The three days of preparation were over. The day of the trial had arrived.


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  • Chinaza PreciousOct 26

    I was kind of disappointed in the first scene but now I look forward to the main match.